Starter quiz
- Which of the following is an example of effective sensory imagery?
- The cat's fur was as soft as silk, and its purr was a gentle hum. ✓
- The cat was purring as it sat on the mat.
- The cat was small and young and also very lively.
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- What is the purpose of using 'show-not-tell' in writing?
- to create vivid images and emotions in the reader's mind ✓
- to list facts about what you're describing
- to give direct information
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- Why is it important to use original similes and metaphors in writing?
- to make writing more predictable
- to create fresh and unique imagery ✓
- to make the reader want to read on
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- Match each element of a single paragraph outline to their function.
- topic sentence⇔introduces the main idea of the paragraph ✓
- supporting detail⇔includes information about what's in the main body of the paragraph ✓
- concluding sentence⇔ends the paragraph ✓
- A success ______ can act as an excellent guide to what you could include in your writing.
- 'criteria' ✓
- If writing is described as 'engaging', this means ...
- it is very busy.
- it is long and detailed.
- it captures and keeps your interest. ✓
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Exit quiz
- Match each keyword to its synonym.
- review⇔look over ✓
- edit⇔make changes ✓
- integral⇔crucial ✓
- Why should you avoid clichés in your writing?
- because they confuse the reader
- to make your writing more original and engaging ✓
- because they add unnecessary detail
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- Why is it important to use sensory imagery in a description?
- It focuses on visual description.
- It helps to create vivid pictures in the reader's mind. ✓
- It makes the reader want to continue reading.
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- How should you use paragraph structure when writing about a malevolent character?
- by separating each sentence into its own section
- by creating a block of text with breaks for easier reading
- by building suspense and gradually revealing details ✓
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- What should you include in your plan before starting your writing?
- details about the vocabulary you want to use ✓
- the dialogue you want to use
- a full physical description of your character
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- ______ and improving your work is crucial for the continual development of your written work.
- 'editing' ✓
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Key learning points
- Reviewing your plan before writing can help ensure your written work meets the success criteria.
- Reviewing your writing after you have finished your first draft is an important step in the writing process.
- Editing and improving your work is crucial for the continual development of your written work.
Common misconception
Pupils often don't see the value in editing work and think once the first draft is finished, the work on it is done.
Writing is a process that involves multiple stages. Revising and editing are crucial steps to refine your work, enhance clarity, and improve overall quality. Even professional writers revise their drafts several times before publishing.
Keywords
Review - to look at something again in order to make changes
Edit - to make changes and corrections to something for improvement
Integral - necessary; really important
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